Here's the third and last part of chapter three. Chapter Three: Sentiency is pretty long, and it's a tie-up to the end.
A few things here:
I really appreciate the 108 spirits message from Fluffy_Kururu. It did a lot to design the theme.
I really try a lot to flesh out the characters as best I can. I can't help but think of Saif as a relentless snarker, Catalina as an impatient practical girl, Mina as giddy-yet-serious-at-times, Mark as ye generic angry character. While I do like this, I'm trying not to stick to these by the letter. I just want to know how genuine and honest the characters feel. Take time criticizing.
Oh, and there's this:
Pokemon aren't as common in this world as one thinks. They're more or less uncommon to see. That's why trainers are quite rare. There are also real-life animals here also, and they have ecological relations with Pokemon as well.
Why am I overworking myself?
Last thing:
I don't think it's acceptable in any case for Pokemon (especially young/small Pokemon) to be able to use the moves Earthquake, Flamethrower, Surf, or any mid-high level moves.
Enjoy!
( There is a prose change as well. Also has a reason. )
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